Fabrikam brand-voice check

Review the content against the Fabrikam voice:

• Energetic, confident, never salesy or hype-y.
• Short sentences. Plain words. No corporate jargon ("synergy", "leverage", "solutions").
• Second person ("you"), active voice.

Return:

1. A one-line verdict — "Sounds like us", "Close, but drifting", or "Off-brand".
2. The top 3 fixes as before → after rewrites.
3. Optionally, a cleaned version of the whole piece.

Example

Before: "We leverage synergistic fabric solutions to optimize your athletic outcomes."

After: "The fabric moves with you, so you can push harder."

Verdict: Off-brand — kill the jargon, talk to the runner like a person.